Sunny fruits harvest,
Oranges, nectarine, peach,
Ripe for the taking.
Contemplate yourself,
Get lost in those pensive skies,
Do your soul seeking.
(A/N The following acrostic poem was based on the color swatch Soft Suede. The theme was derived from classic mobsters and their suede fashion, but I decided to drive a more modern spin on the term "gangster" by focusing on the Los Angeles Latinx gang rivalries.)
Gangster
Old to new ways, the gangsters traded in their suede for chains,
Flask half full of mind warping liquor, a worm swims in its depths, a joint is passed between their teeth,
Track marks dotting their mother's arms,
Sour faces and boiling blood, their culture bonds them as a family,
Upkeep their reputation, break fingers to settle debts,
East side represent, selling dope to Suburbia,
Dead bodies dumped in the allies as a warning to the other crews,
Eternal pride to their lord.
(A/N: The following free verse poem was based on a green color palette. While the colors bear royal names like Emerald Shore and Island Time the shades themselves are not vibrant at all - they're either very dark or hazy - it's deceptive. So this poem describes a place that is not what it seems, and therefor derives its name from two deceitful sources: a mirage being a hallucination, and the lotus being infamous in Greek legend for trapping people in time.)
Lotus Mirage
We spent every long day on the beach, splashing in the waves,
Everyone proclaimed Lotus Oasis was the place to be,
My family were on their knees begging for a visit,
When our week on the island drudged on for what felt like a month,
I began to tire of the sun,
But I wished that I had appreciated it more when it vanished behind the clouds,
A tropical storm that no one had predicted was quickly approaching,
The only road off the island was backed up because of the rain,
I stared out the window at the beach while our car sat still in the line of traffic,
The drizzle glazed the sand over like glass,
The normally blue bay waters had morphed into a pale, brothy puddle that crashed against the emerald shores like a spirit clawing its way from the other world,
Time passed unnaturally on the island, but as we watched the bodies crawl from the water, I wished that we'd never visited.
(A/N The following Narrative is about scorn and uncertainty. The color it was based off was called Anchors Aweigh and can only be described as the deepest shade of purple you can reach before crossing over to black.)
Anchored
That morning on the docks, he promised that he'd return to me,
The way he smiled under that Navy cap squeezed my heart enough to believe him, but not enough to dry my tears while I watched his ship leave the port.
We knew we were battling cliches, a young couple separated by war,
One of us was bound to be unfaithful to the other,
But I was naive to think us stronger,
Months ticked by, ships came and went from the docks, but never with my love,
So many days passed that I lost the motivation to go look for him,
I started to forget what his smile looked like,
I remember passing by a news stand, and seeing in the papers that the war was over, I flipped his engagement ring around in my palm as I stared at the front page picture,
"Well if the war doesn't kill him," I couldn't help but think, as I dropped the silver into the dirt, "He'd better be dead before he comes back to this town."
You continually impress me, Charli, with your unique and sophisticated approaches to these writing prompts. You take things in such interesting directions and you are a talented writer. I will be stealing so many of your pieces for LAD Fair and Think. Magazine. The gangster piece is quite inspired and how you've managed to capture a life so (assumingly?) far removed from your own is striking, especially the lines "Track marks dotting their mother's arms,/Sour faces and boiling blood, their culture bonds them as a family,." And how clever of you to spin that iconic photo of the post-war celebratory kiss into a means of "scorn and uncertainty" from the jealous fiancee.
ReplyDeleteVery much enjoyed both of your haikus, loved all of your picture choices as well, they go with your writings great. Your poem gangster was absolutely amazing, everything went together so well and made so much sense. I loved your word choice in your Lotus Mirage poem. Words like proclaimed, vanished, and drizzled. I really enjoyed your last poem as well.
ReplyDeleteHey Charli, I loved all of these pieces! Your "Lotus Mirage" poem had such vivid imagery and really spoke to me. Also your last poem took such an interesting take on that photo and I absolutely loved it! You are such a talented writer and with these pieces you showcased several different writing styles and executed them so well! Keep up the good work!
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