Color Comments

Taylor:
     Haikus:
          -Hey, Taylor! I really love how these two poems tie together with the seasons. I can really feel the inspired colors in your words. Keep it up!
     Acrostic:
          -Great job, Taylor! You managed to tie tranquility into your words. This poem made me feel at peace. Lovely work.
     Free Verse:
          -Hey, Taylor! The scattered elements in this poem made it feel very innocent and enjoyable. Great job setting a mood.
     Narrative:
          -Hey, Taylor! I love the message within this poem. It shows true commitment. "Relationship goals."
     Collage Inspired:
          -The way this story flows reminds me a lot of my native grandmother's story telling techniques. There's always a morale in Shawnee stories, and you managed to capture that same execution. Nice work.

Samantha:
     Haikus:
          -There's a certain kind of mystery to these! Yet somehow you've managed to imply a strong mood with your subtle words. Fantastic job.
     Acrostic:
          -I can feel the pain in this one. Sometimes the darkest work can be the most beautiful. You're brave for sharing this emotion. Keep it up!
     Free Verse:
          -This poem flows in a familiar way. The childhood details are very relatable. Great job.
     Narrative:
          -I feel for the main character, but I still find a hidden meaning in these words. I hope these ideas can inspire girls to not change who they are for someone else. Keep it up.
     Collage Inspired:
          -I've never actually watched The Bachelorette, but the details in this piece really explain the gist of it! Great synopsis.